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I am Mark Lester Marte and currently working as a Mechanical Engineer in Fluor Daniel Inc. - Philippines. Overall, I have a solid 12 years working experience working as a Mechanical Engineer from different fields of engineering such as design, Construction, and CAD Modelling. In my 12 years’ experience working as a Mechanical Engineer, it has equipped me the appropriate skills, knowledge and experience which I needed in dealing with all problems or situations that I have encountered. These have developed my strong problem-solving skills, honed my ability to manage conflict from Clients, Colleagues and Vendors which at times are considered challenging. This was also a channel to fully develop my technical knowledge which I am keen to utilize in every project I would be involved in order to deliver the project and allocated budget flawlessly. I have an active Express Entry profile who is seeking to be a Canadian Immigrant. Also, if given the chance I would like to pursue my professional goals which is to become a Professional Engineer in Canada to fully practice my profession. Thank you for taking time to read my application and for your consideration. Looking forward to hearing from your end.
I am Mark Lester
Marte
and
currently
working
as a Mechanical
Engineer
in
Fluor
Daniel Inc.
-
Philippines.
Overall
, I have a solid 12 years
working
experience
working
as a Mechanical
Engineer
from
different
fields of engineering such as design, Construction, and CAD Modelling. In my 12 years’ experience
working
as a Mechanical
Engineer
, it has equipped me the appropriate
skills
, knowledge and experience which I needed in dealing with all problems or situations that I have encountered. These have developed my strong problem-solving
skills
, honed my ability to manage conflict from Clients, Colleagues and Vendors which at times
are considered
challenging. This was
also
a channel to
fully
develop my technical knowledge which I am keen to utilize in every project I would
be involved
in order to deliver the project and allocated budget
flawlessly
.

I have an active Express Entry profile who is seeking to be a Canadian Immigrant.
Also
, if
given
the chance I would like to pursue my professional goals which is to become a Professional
Engineer
in Canada to
fully
practice my profession.

Thank you for taking time to read my application and for your consideration. Looking forward to hearing from your
end
.
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IELTS letter application letter for an immigrant

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
198 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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