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You bought an iron a local shop yesterday. When you got it home you found out it does not heat properly, so you can not use it. Furthmore, the water container ask for another iron. You would prefer another brand. Explain the reason.

You bought an iron a local shop yesterday. When you got it home you found out it does not heat properly, so you can not use it. Furthmore, the water container ask for another iron. You would prefer another brand. Explain the reason. k5BkW

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a purchase which I bought a day before in your store. I and my husband moved here a month ago. We are a young family which recently married. This is a period that we are both getting used to live in a new house and communicate with our new neighbours. Every woman want to have a home comfortable. I am this kind of woman. We need some household utensils, for example, an iron. I heard from my neighbours about your store in Brown Street which is popular with brand goods in our town. Unfortunately, the reality was very different. I bought an iron, got it home and I found out it did not heat accurately. Bisides that, the water container was leak. I was extremely dissappointed. I contacted your representative, but unluckily without any success. The best solution would be for me to change to another brand. Therefore, I look forward to hearing your comments. Sincerely, . . .

Dear Sir,

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purchase
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bought
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before
 in your store.

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moved
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used
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live
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some
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 in our town.

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different
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
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got
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 that, the water container was leak. I was extremely
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dissappointed
. I contacted your representative, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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unluckily
 without any success.

The best solution would be for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 to another brand. Therefore
, I look forward to hearing your comments.

Sincerely
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