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memory course advertisment

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Dear Sir / Madam I read about the advertisement in relation to memory class advertisement through 10 weeks and that’s very attractive for my problem. This problem onset after getting birth my elder kid as an old woman, persistent missing made me embarrassing whether this a chronic disease I hope to cure it, sometimes its receives to crucial level especially when forgetting the doctor appointments or family’s events, teachers meeting. consequently, my friends suggested writing a reminder into my cellular phone but that's not worked, then transmitted to take vitamines to stimulate the cognitive side even though allergic until saw your adv, so I'm would like to inquire the methods that concerning to processing it and the dates of the course, I hope to be respectively sessions through the weeks in the morning to spurt the memories gradually, and certainly the fees are significant. I will leave my number to contact if there is a space 00962791657789
Dear Sir / Madam

I read about the advertisement in relation to memory
class
advertisement through 10 weeks and that’s
very
attractive for my problem. This problem onset after getting birth my elder kid as an
old
woman, persistent missing made me embarrassing whether this a chronic disease I hope to cure it,
sometimes
its receives to crucial level
especially
when forgetting the doctor appointments or family’s
events
, teachers meeting.

consequently
, my friends suggested writing a reminder into my cellular phone
but
that's not worked, then transmitted to take
vitamines
to stimulate the cognitive side
even though
allergic until
saw
your adv,
so
I'm would like to inquire the methods that concerning to processing it and the dates of the course, I hope to be
respectively
sessions through the weeks in the morning to spurt the memories
gradually
, and
certainly
the fees are significant. I will
leave
my number to contact if there is a space

00962791657789
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IELTS letter memory course advertisment

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  American English
2 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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