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You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter • explain where the place was and how you got there • describe what you saw • offer to take your friend there

You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter • explain where the place was and how you got there • describe what you saw • offer to take your friend there nQAP

Dear Pooja, How are you, hope you are doing wonderful. Last week I went to a temple and I’m writing this letter to share my experience with you. Here all are stressed with our work, due to the current pandemic situation we never go out unless an emergency comes. So, to get out of this work pressure we planned for a trip and mom says she prefer to visit a temple. On 25th February 2021, we went to Kollur Mookambika Temple, which is located at Karnataka District. It is around 500km from our place, so we hire a car and both me and dad drive the car. We reached there by 4AM, we go to the hotel that is already booked and soon after our bath we go directly to the temple. For my surprise, there was no crowd and we were able to pray in front of the statue for enough time. I feel very blessed and motivated because it’s the first time I’m visiting a temple with such surrounding. Perhaps, if it’s not Covid 19, we didn’t get such opportunity. Coming August there is big festival which last for 20 days, if you agree we will go together and you can also feel positiveness of the place. Hope to hear from you soon, so that I can book our train ticket in advance. Yours lovingly Meera

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 time I’m visiting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsanctuarysynagoguehousemosquepagodashrine
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, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 that I can book our train ticket in advance.

Yours lovingly


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Meera