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write a letter to the principal of a college where you are acceted for a course and say that uou cannot start uour course. In your letter please write which course you had applied for, why you cannot start it,ask about the future couse availability

write a letter to the principal of a college where you are acceted for a course and say that uou cannot start uour course. In your letter please write which course you had applied for, why you cannot start it, ask about the future couse availability XOXN

Dear Mr. David, I am writing in connection with the summer programme in your St. Thomas college, where I got selected. Unfortunately, I would be unable to attend it. My name is Shawna, and I am the student of final year MSc. Biotechnology and had applied for the innovations in BT course which is in your vacation curriculum. However, I would not be able to participate owing to the fact that my presence at home is demanded. The reason of my absence is considerable. My grandmother is returning from the UK, after her treatment but she has very little time left in our life due to her terminal illness. Therefore, all her childrens are fulfilling her wish of staying togather in her last days. Likewise, it is highly possible that I would not be available for the studies. I apologize for the inconvinience my sudden withdrawal might cause you. Besides, I would be delighted to take the project down the year if its related to my subject. Kindly inform me regarding the same. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Shawna Patel

Dear Mr. David,

I am writing in connection with the summer Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
 in your St. Thomas college, where I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 selected. Unfortunately, I would be unable to attend it.

My name is Shawna, and I am the student of final year Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.M.Sc.
MSc.
 Biotechnology and had applied for the innovations in BT course which is in your vacation curriculum. However
, I would not be able to participate owing to the fact that my presence at home is demanded
.

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but
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in our life due to her terminal illness. Therefore
, all her Possible spelling mistake found.children
childrens
 are fulfilling her wish of staying Possible spelling mistake found.togetherto gather
togather
 in her last days. Likewise
, it is highly
 possible that I would not be available for the studies.

I apologize for the Possible spelling mistake found.inconvenience
inconvinience
 my sudden withdrawal might cause you. Besides
, I would be delighted
 to take the project down the year if Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 related to my subject. Kindly inform me regarding the same.

Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
,

Shawna Patel