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You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter – introduce yourself – say why you are making this trip – ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)

You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter – introduce yourself – say why you are making this trip – ask some questions about the city (e. g. places to see, things to do, things to bring) PO1d
Dear Samson, I am Sanju cousin of Satinder who studied with you at York University, Manitoba, Canada. He gave me your reference and told me that you are currently residing in Brampton. I hope you are doing great. I have planned to visit Brampton city with my family this summer. The tourist visa of my family has been already approved. I heard a lot about the beautiful skyscrapers, museums and national parks located in this city. I have a few questions before I book flight tickets. First, I would like to know the weather in the month of June and July and what kind of clothes do I bring on this trip. Second, kindly suggest to me the best tourist spots to visit where my children enjoy to their fullest. Finally, please let me know if there is the best company organising excursion trip to the countryside. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Gurwinder Singh.
Dear Samson,

I am
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Sanju
cousin of
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Satinder
who studied with you at York University, Manitoba, Canada. He gave me your reference and
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told
me that you are
currently
residing in Brampton. I hope you are doing great.

I have planned to visit Brampton city with my family this summer. The tourist visa of my family has been already approved. I heard a lot about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
skyscrapers, museums and national parks located in this city.

I have a few questions
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before
I book flight tickets.
First
, I would like to know the weather in the month of June and July and what kind of clothes do I bring on this trip. Second, kindly suggest to me the best tourist spots to visit where my children enjoy to their fullest.
Finally
,
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please
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let
me know if there is the best
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company
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organising
excursion trip to the countryside.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Gurwinder
Singh.
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IELTS letter You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter – introduce yourself – say why you are making this trip – ask some questions about the city (e. g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)

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158 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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