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You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write to your friend about this place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there describe what you saw offer to take your friend there.

You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write to your friend about this place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there describe what you saw offer to take your friend there. mlnK
Dear Chris, Hope you are safe and sound. I’m writing this letter to let you know that recently, I visited an ancient place and this changed my perception towards life. Last month, I toured Darjeeling which is located in the Eastern part of India. I travelled by air and landed at Bagdogra Domestic Airport, which is 80kms away from the city. I hired a taxi and reached my accommodation within 2 hours without any discomfort. I visited quite a few places like Tea gardens, Rock Garden, Nathula Pass which is the border of China and finally went to Peace Pagoda. I was really amazed after visiting Peace Pagoda where I saw 4 incarnations of Lord Buddha in the form of sitting, sleeping, standing and mediating. I spent half of the day and the peace on and around that place made me understand the importance of maintaining calmness in real life. As you have interest in these types of places, I would like to you to add this place also in your itinerary, so that we can visit together. Warm Regards, Roger
Dear Chris,

Hope you are safe and sound. I’m writing this letter to
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you know that recently, I visited an ancient
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and this
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changed
my perception towards life.

Last month, I toured Darjeeling which
is located
in the Eastern part of India. I travelled by air and landed at
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Bagdogra
Domestic Airport, which is 80kms away from the city. I hired a taxi and reached my accommodation within 2 hours without any discomfort.

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I
visited quite a few
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places
like Tea gardens, Rock Garden,
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Nathula
Pass which is the border of China and
finally
went to Peace Pagoda.
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I
was
really
amazed after visiting Peace Pagoda where I
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4 incarnations of Lord Buddha in the form of sitting, sleeping, standing and mediating.
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I
spent half of the day and the peace on and around that
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place
made me understand the importance of maintaining calmness in real life.

As you have interest in these types of
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places
, I would like to you to
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add
this
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place
also
in your itinerary,
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so
that we can visit together.

Warm Regards,

Roger
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IELTS letter You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write to your friend about this place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there describe what you saw offer to take your friend there.

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180 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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