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Letter to manager for training course

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Dear Adam, It is very exciting to hear that you are joining Google and moving to New your for your work. Congratulations on your new role. I am really sure that you are going to rock at your new workplace. Google is indeed one of the finest firms to work with. Your office is located near menelo park which is the heart of this city and a great place to live in. You will absolutely love the restaurants near by the area. Menelo park is specifically known for restaurants serving great Italian cuisines. Apart from these, this area has a lot of shopping complexes. You will absolutely love the ambience. The public transportation is quite fantastic here. It has a great train and bus connectivity and the public transport starts from as early as 5AM to 10PM. After 10PM, you can hop in for cabs. The fare is quire affordable. A lot my friends put up near the same place and I'll introduce you to them once you are here. Trust me, you are going to love their company and feel like home with them. I look forward to meeting you very soon. Warm Regards, Pete.
Dear Adam,

It is
very
exciting to hear that you are joining Google and moving to New your for your work. Congratulations on your new role. I am
really
sure that you are going to rock at your new workplace. Google is
indeed
one of the finest firms to work with.

Your office
is located
near
menelo
park which is the heart of this city and a great place to
live
in. You will
absolutely
love
the restaurants
near by
the area.
Menelo
park is
specifically
known for restaurants serving great Italian cuisines. Apart from these, this area has
a lot of
shopping complexes. You will
absolutely
love
the ambience.

The public transportation is quite fantastic here. It has a great train and bus connectivity and the public transport
starts
from as early as 5AM to 10PM. After 10PM, you can hop in for cabs. The fare is quire affordable.

A lot my friends put up near the same place and I'll introduce you to them once you are here. Trust me, you are going to
love
their
company
and feel like home with them.

I look forward to meeting you
very
soon
.

Warm Regards,

Pete.
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IELTS letter Letter to manager for training course

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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