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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company ajnG
Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing you this letter to request some time off from work. I am actually studying for my master's degree in marketing and advertisement. Let me explain to you in detail last year I enrolled for the fast track master's program at centennial college. This is my last semester and the final exam for this course starts in a week. I will finish my exams in 3 weeks. I would be willing to work more hours moving forward, and I would be inclined to work on my day off aswell. This is a very important phase of my career, as I see it as a Pioneer step. My qualification would later on help me to move forward and apply for more position in our company. I hope you sanction my leave and help me in my achievement. Yours sincerely, Rahul Vasaya
Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing you this letter to request
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time off from work. I am actually studying for my master's degree in marketing and advertisement.
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Let
me
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explain
to you in detail last year I enrolled for the
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fast
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track
master's program at centennial college. This is my last semester and the final exam for this course
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starts
in a week. I will finish my exams in 3 weeks. I would be willing to work more hours moving forward, and I would
be inclined
to work on my day off
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aswell
. This is a
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very
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important
phase of my career, as I
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see
it as a Pioneer step. My qualification would later on
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help
me to
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move
forward and apply for more position in our
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company
. I hope you sanction my
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leave
and
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help
me in my achievement.

Yours
sincerely
, Rahul
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Vasaya

IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company

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144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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