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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job DWek
Dear Tom, I received your letter two days ago and I am so glad that you want to find a job in China. Yesterday I discussed this with one of my friends working at Baidu, a large IT company in Beijing, and he told me that they wanted to hire someone who could be responsible for their new English version website. I think this job is really suitable for you, because they want someone who has soft programming skills and perfect command of English. I know you have great interest in soft programming and you taught me a lot about how to design a website when I was in Canada last year. You even showed me lots of amazing websites and online games that you created yourself. So I think this job is really suitable for you. And since English is your mother tongue, you will not have any problems about it. You can find information about the vacancy on their website. Search for the English version of the Baidu Corporation online. If you have any questions about this vacancy, please feel free to contact me. Hope to hear from you soon. All the best! Name
Dear Tom,

I received your letter two days
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glad that you want to find a job in China. Yesterday I discussed this with one of my friends working at Baidu, a large IT
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company
in Beijing, and he
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told
me that they wanted to hire someone who could be responsible for their new English version
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website
. I
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think
this job is
really
suitable for you,
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because
they want someone who has soft programming
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skills
and perfect command of English.

I know you have great interest in soft programming and you taught me a lot about how to design a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
website
when I was in Canada last year. You even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
me lots of amazing websites and online games that you created yourself.
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So
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
this job is
really
suitable for you. And since English is your mother tongue, you will not have any problems about it.

You can find information about the vacancy on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
website
. Search for the English version of the Baidu Corporation online. If you have any questions about this vacancy,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
feel free to contact me.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

All the best!

Name

IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job

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  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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