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You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the bank manager, explain where and how you lost it and any relevant details. Ask the manager to cancel the old card and send you a replacement one.

You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the bank manager, explain where and how you lost it and any relevant details. Ask the manager to cancel the old card and send you a replacement one. jlGd
Dear Sir, I am writing to confirm the loss of my credit card. I have telephoned your office earlier today. The details of my card are as follows. It is a Master Card in the name of Mia Smith. The credit card number is 1234 4321 8888. I have had it from 2018. This card is valid from 2018 to 2023. The last time I used this card was when I purchased a pair of shoes in Nike Sylvia Park at about 15: 30 yesterday (March 6, 2021). I didn’t realise that the card was missing until this morning. I called Sylvia Park at once. Unfortunately, the staff there could not find the card. Could you please cancel my old card immediately and send me a replacement one as soon as possible? I can be contacted at the following address: 18 White Stone Road, Flat Bush. If you want to call me, here is my number: 123456789. Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mia Smith
Dear Sir,

I am writing to confirm the loss of my credit
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. I have telephoned your office earlier
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today
.

The
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details
of my
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card
are as follows. It is a Master
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Card
in the name of Mia Smith. The credit
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card
number is 1234 4321 8888. I have had it from 2018. This
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card
is valid from 2018 to 2023.

The last time I
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used
this
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card
was when I
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purchased
a pair of shoes in Nike Sylvia Park at about 15: 30 yesterday (March 6, 2021). I didn’t
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realise
that the
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card
was missing until this morning. I called Sylvia Park at once. Unfortunately, the staff there could not find the card.

Could you
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cancel my
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old
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card
immediately and
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send
me a replacement one as
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soon
as possible? I can
be contacted
at the following address: 18 White Stone Road, Flat Bush. If you want to call me, here is my number: 123456789.

Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mia Smith
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IELTS letter You have lost your credit card. Write a letter to the bank manager, explain where and how you lost it and any relevant details. Ask the manager to cancel the old card and send you a replacement one.

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8 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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