Dear Leon,
I have just returned from my holidays in France and while we were there we climbed a mountain called 'Parleman' in the French Alps. We were able to drive halfway up the mountain but then the road stopped. So we parked, put on our walking boots and began the long uphill struggle. But the place was a bit of heaven and I wish to take you to this excellent place someday.
In spite of the road at the beginning, it still took us a while to complete the climb but it was well worth the effort. When we got to the top of the mountain, the view was incredible. I could see right across the town and the lake to one side, and on the other side were the snow-covered peaks of Mont Blanc. It was simply breathtaking.
As you know, we often go to France for our holiday and next time we plan a trip, I'd really like to take you there. I'm sure you would love the scenery and as you enjoy exercise, you would be able to take advantage of all the mountain walks.
Hope to meet you soon.
Warm wishes,
Paul
Dear Leon,
I have
just
returned from my holidays in France and while we were there we climbed a
mountain
called '
Parleman
' in the French Alps. We were able to drive halfway up the
mountain
but
then the road
stopped
.
So
we parked, put on our walking boots and began the long uphill struggle.
But
the place was a bit of heaven and I wish to take you to this excellent place someday.
In spite of
the road at the beginning, it
still
took us a while to complete the climb
but
it was well worth the effort. When we
got
to the top of the
mountain
, the view was incredible. I could
see
right across the town and the lake to one side, and on the other side were the snow-covered peaks of Mont Blanc. It was
simply
breathtaking.
As you know, we
often
go to France for our holiday and
next
time we plan a trip, I'd
really
like to take you there. I'm sure you would
love
the scenery and as you enjoy exercise, you would be able to take advantage of all the
mountain
walks.
Hope to
meet
you
soon
.
Warm wishes,
Paul
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