Dear Gretel,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to tell you about a fascinating place that I discovered unexpectedly very near to our college. I would like you to join me next time I go there.
While cycling last morning, I took a detour from our regular path and cycled along the banks of the stream that passes behind the main college building. After one kilometre or so, I reached a dead end and when I was about to turn, I became anxious to know where the stream goes beyond this as I could see no land post that end. I was gasped to see that the small looking stream turned into a beautiful waterfall with sun-raises cutting through the water and displaying prism colours. The place looked so serene and calm. The most astonishing part was the beauty of nature and I wished to stay there for long.
As I know you have an interest in photography, I do not think you should miss taking pictures of this wonderful place. I will be cycling to this place again on Saturday and I would really want you to come along with me and see the beauty of nature for yourself.
See you on Saturday!
Best wishes,
Gemma
Dear Gretel,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to
tell
you about a fascinating
place
that I discovered
unexpectedly
very
near to our college. I would like you to
join
me
next
time I go there.
While cycling last morning, I took a detour from our regular path and cycled along the banks of the stream that passes behind the main college building. After one
kilometre
or
so
, I reached a dead
end
and when I was about to turn, I became anxious to know where the stream goes beyond this as I could
see
no land post that
end
. I
was gasped
to
see
that the
small
looking stream turned into a
beautiful
waterfall with sun-raises cutting through the water and displaying prism
colours
. The
place
looked
so
serene and calm. The most astonishing part was the beauty of nature and I wished to stay there for long.
As I know you have an interest in photography, I do not
think
you should miss taking pictures of this wonderful
place
. I will be cycling to this
place
again on Saturday and I would
really
want you to
come
along with me and
see
the beauty of nature for yourself.
See
you on Saturday!
Best wishes,
Gemma
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