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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply

Dear John, I Hope you are doing well. First of all sorry for my late response for your query. Last few weeks I am very busy with my office work. I read your letter completely. You mentioned that you are thinking to choose the structural engineering stream which I did last year. If you select that course for your postgraduate degree then definitely you will have a bright future a head. Over the few decades there is a great demand for the design engineer in the construction. If you finish that course you will have a chance to do a job in the multinational companies. My university has MOU with some of the international companies and in the second year of your course university will provide the on-campus interviews for the students. Recently, our university listed in the top 10 among other universities in our country. I applied this course through the university portal. If you are interested to join that course, then please let me know and I will guide you. All the best for your future endeavours. Thanking you. Regards, Sravani
Dear John,

I Hope you are doing well.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
sorry for my late response for your query. Last few weeks I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
busy with my office work.

I read your letter completely. You mentioned that you are thinking to choose the structural engineering stream which I did last year. If you select that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for your postgraduate degree then definitely you will have a bright future a head. Over the few decades there is a great demand for the design engineer in the construction.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you finish that
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course
you will have a chance to do a job in the multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
.

My
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university
has
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MOU
with
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
international
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companies
and in the second year of your
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course
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
will provide the on-campus interviews for the students. Recently, our
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university
listed in the top 10 among other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
in our country.

I applied this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
through the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
portal. If you
are interested
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
that
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course
, then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know and I will guide you. All the best for your future
Possible spelling mistake. 'endeavours' is British English.
endeavours
.

Thanking you.

Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sravani

IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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