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You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter

You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter n6xNo
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share feedback about the local restaurant called Mama Manana. This eatery is located in the centre of Kyiv just a stone's throw away from the main square also known as The Independent Square. There is a myriad of Georgian dishes and the greatest is Adjarian khachapuri. It tastes as delicious as an origin khachapuri that I have tried in Georgia this summer. Moreover, there is magnificent Chkmeruli that everyone enjoys and that makes you feel craving to come back to this restaurant again. Besides all this, the restaurant has amiable waiters and always takes care of the client's comfort. They serve many extra features such as online order, a takeout, and delivery to any address through Kyiv. In addition, you can use all services twenty-four hours per day. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and I hope this information will be of help in your news about local restaurants. Faithfully yours, Helen Myslitskaya
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to share feedback about the local restaurant called
In some contexts, this is childish language. Consider alternatives.
Mama
'Manana' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "mañana"
Manana
.

This eatery
is located
in the
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centre
of Kyiv
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just
a stone's throw away from the main square
also
known as The Independent Square.

There is a myriad of Georgian dishes and the greatest is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Adjarian
Possible spelling mistake found.
khachapuri
. It tastes as delicious as an origin
Possible spelling mistake found.
khachapuri
that I have tried in Georgia this summer.
Moreover
, there is magnificent
Possible spelling mistake found.
Chkmeruli
that everyone enjoys and that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
you feel craving to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back to this restaurant again.

Besides
all this, the restaurant has amiable waiters and always takes care of the client's comfort. They serve
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
extra features such as online order, a takeout, and delivery to any address through Kyiv.
In addition
, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
all services twenty-four hours per day.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
and I hope this information will be of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in your news about local restaurants.

Faithfully
yours,

Helen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Myslitskaya
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IELTS letter You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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