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Email to employer regarding experience certificate

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Hope you are doing well. Sir, I require an experience certificate for my immigration purpose, as I need to submit it to the Canadian embassy to prove to them my working experience with TDI International.  Though, I have a certificate but, according to the Canadian standards, it should include Job responsibilities (which should match 60% with the same Canadian job title), wages, working hours (full time or part-time). And promotion date, etc. I sent a detailed copy of the experience certificate to Amit Sir, for the reference and I have attached a copy of it to this email as well. It would be really appreciated if you could help me with this. As my PR file is on hold due to the certificate.
Hope you are doing well.

Sir, I require an experience certificate for my immigration purpose, as I need to submit it to the Canadian embassy to prove to them my working experience with TDI International.  Though, I have a certificate
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but
, according to the Canadian standards, it should include Job responsibilities (which should match 60% with the same Canadian job title), wages, working hours (full time or part-time). And promotion date, etc. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
a detailed copy of the experience certificate to Amit Sir, for the reference and I have attached a copy of it to this email
as well
.

It would be
really
appreciated if you could
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help
 me with this.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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my PR file is on hold due to the certificate.
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IELTS letter Email to employer regarding experience certificate

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  American English
3 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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