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Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take oR58B
Dear Sir, I am Barry Richardson and live near to your restaurant. I am writing this letter to inform you about the disturbance due to your restaurant. During evening time, there are lot of customers who enjoy the food at your place. At the same time, it is really noisy due to the crowd and the music which is being played in your restaurant. I am not able to sleep properly as noise is too much during late hours which is impacting my next day as well. Requesting you to reduce the hours of the restaurant or the noise so that residents of the area can have a better sleep. If things will not be sorted out soon, I will have to complaint this to the local restaurant authorities for the mutual solution. Hope you can understand my situation and can help me in this regard. Yours sincerely, Barry Richardson.
Dear Sir,

I am Barry Richardson and
live
near to your
restaurant
. I am writing this letter to inform you about the disturbance due to your restaurant.

During evening time, there are
lot of
customers who enjoy the food at your place. At the same time, it is
really
noisy due to the crowd and the music which is
being played
in your
restaurant
. I am not able to sleep
properly
as noise is too much during late hours which is impacting my
next
day
as well
.

Requesting you to
reduce
the hours of the
restaurant
or the noise
so
that residents of the area can have a better sleep. If things will not
be sorted
out
soon
, I will
have to
complaint this to the local
restaurant
authorities for the mutual solution.

Hope you can understand my situation and can
help
me in this regard.

Yours
sincerely
,

Barry Richardson.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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