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You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?

You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do? 85Gx5
I am a tenant of your flat CC HOMES apartment and have been renting for last seven months. I am writing to inform you about the consistent disturbance caused by neighbours next to our house which has made my life miserable. Let me explain the situation in detail. To elucidate as you are aware that the house next to us is a paying guest therefore many bachelors live in it who are mostly student studying in nearby universities. The problem is that these students organize late-night parties and play loud music which causes disturbance to us while we are sleeping. Although I have requested them personally to not do such activities in the residential area however they have never listened and keep on repeating these activities. I think this matter deserves your urgent attention. The ideal solution is you talk with this neighbour and give him a deadline to eliminate this noise. Thank you for your time and consideration.
I am a tenant of your flat CC HOMES apartment and have been renting for last seven months. I am writing to inform you about the consistent disturbance caused by
neighbours
next
to our
house
which has made my life miserable.
Let
me
explain
the situation in detail.

To elucidate as you are aware that the
house
next
to us is a paying guest
therefore
many
bachelors
live
in it who are
mostly
student studying in nearby universities. The problem is that these students organize late-night parties and play loud music which causes disturbance to us while we are sleeping. Although I have requested them
personally
to not do such activities in the residential area
however
they have never listened and
keep
on repeating these activities.

I
think
this matter deserves your urgent attention. The ideal solution is you talk with this
neighbour
and give him a deadline to eliminate this noise.

Thank you for your time and consideration.
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IELTS letter You are renting an apartment. Write a letter to your landlord regarding a noise problem from your neighbors. Include the following in your letter: – What is the problem? – What have you done about it? – What would you like the landlord to do?

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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