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Your friend is planning to go on a business trip to a city you know well. Tell him/her about the attractions to go sightseeing. Recommend a restaurant to eat. Give some advice on transportation.

Your friend is planning to go on a business trip to a city you know well. Tell him/her about the attractions to go sightseeing. Recommend a restaurant to eat. Give some advice on transportation. 56kbV
Dear Jay, The purpose of writing this letter is in regards to convey a ew details about the city you are planning to go on a business trip. I am delighted that I can share my experience about Hyderabad, a city of diverse cultures and breathtaking views. It is a capital city of the state Telangana known for its exquisite historical places. For instance, Charminar, Golconda fort and Seven tomb fort are the eye-catching places for tourism. Moreover, you will be elated to visit an ancient museum which provides an essence of the history of Nizams. Further delicious dishes are the main attraction of the place. There are numerous eminent restaurants in the city with varieties of food. Although, I will recommend you to taste the tasty Chicken biryani of Ruman restaurant along with Irani tea of the nearby Niloufer cafe. However, there will a humongous traffic issue in the city. Hence, I advise you not to travel through the bus as it may be time-consuming. Instead, a sharing auto or cab will do the needful without wasting much time. I look forward to hearing from you soon about your experience. Thanking You, Kay.
Dear Jay,

The purpose of writing this letter is
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
convey
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
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ew
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about the city you are planning to go on a business trip.

I
am delighted
that I can share my experience about Hyderabad, a city of diverse cultures and breathtaking views. It is a capital city of the state Telangana known for its exquisite historical places.
For instance
,
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Charminar
, Golconda fort and Seven tomb
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fort
are the eye-catching places for tourism.
Moreover
, you will
be elated
to visit an ancient museum which provides an essence of the history of
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Nizams
.

Further
delicious dishes are the main attraction of the place. There are numerous eminent restaurants in the city with varieties of food.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, I will recommend you to taste the tasty Chicken biryani of
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Ruman
restaurant along with
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Irani
tea of the nearby
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Niloufer
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.

However
, there will a humongous traffic issue in the city.
Hence
, I advise you not to travel through the bus as it may be time-consuming.
Instead
, a sharing auto or cab will do the needful without wasting much time.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
about your experience.

Thanking You,

Kay.
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IELTS letter Your friend is planning to go on a business trip to a city you know well. Tell him/her about the attractions to go sightseeing. Recommend a restaurant to eat. Give some advice on transportation.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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