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You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say : 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say: 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it? e5w3J
Dear Abhi, Hope you are doing well. You will be happy to know that I'm recently promoted as Sales Manager with a salary hike of 15% at my current organization. However, I have decided to discontinue my tenure with them as I'm planning to start my own cafe. Do you remember I always use to tell you about this goal of mine? I feel now is the time to follow my dreams. Therefore, I have selected 2-3 options of places to rent at the city centre and I am also in talks with few chefs for shortlisting the food menu. I'm planning to start with a medium-sized place, having a sitting capacity of 15-20 inside the shop and 8-10 outside. Since you are a renowned interior decorator, I'd want you to suggest me on the look and theme of the cafe. Moreover, I have a few ideas in mind but I would prefer expert advice. So, let's catch up sometime this week at my place over dinner to discuss more about it. Can't tell you how excited I am! Love, Sweta
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Abhi
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Hope you are doing well. You will be happy to know that I'm recently promoted as Sales Manager with a salary hike of 15% at my
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current
organization.
However
, I have decided to discontinue my tenure with them as I'm planning to
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start
my
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own
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.

Do you remember I always
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use to
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tell
you about this goal of mine? I feel
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now
is the time to follow my dreams.
Therefore
, I have selected 2-3 options of places to rent at the city
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centre and
I am
also
in talks with few chefs for shortlisting the food menu. I'm planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
with a medium-sized place, having a sitting capacity of 15-20 inside the shop and 8-10 outside.

Since you are a renowned interior decorator, I'd want you to suggest me on the look and theme of the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.
Moreover
, I have a few
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
in mind
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but
I would prefer expert advice.
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So
,
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let
's catch up sometime this week at my place over dinner to discuss more about it.

Can't
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tell
you how excited I am!

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Love
,

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Sweta
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IELTS letter You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say: 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

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7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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