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You recently visited a foreign country and got some information at the Tourist Information Centre. The information given to you was wrong. Write a letter to the centre manager and explain What was the information required? How was the wrong information provided? What problems did you have because of this

You recently visited a foreign country and got some information at the Tourist Information Centre. The information given to you was wrong. Write a letter to the centre manager and explain What was the information required? How was the wrong information provided? What problems did you have because of this w5Am
Dear Sir, My name is Melvil James and I would like to draw your attention to the false information given to me from your office regarding the nearby tourist spots. I visited London last month and as per my friend’s suggestion, I visited your office. I enquired about the must-see places and suggestion for cheap accommodation and a flexible cab service. Firstly, I was told that the London museum is open on weekends from 9 am to 6 pm. However, after going there, I realized that the museum closes at 3 pm on weekends. Secondly, the city library suggested by your guide is currently closed to the public because of renovation activities. The phone number of the cab driver provided to me was also incorrect. In addition to that, the hotel recommended by you was too costly. I faced numerous problems because of the misleading data. The museum was closed by the time I reached there and I got so much disheartened. Next day morning, I went to the library and realized that it was closed for repairs. I ended up spending most of my time staying idle in the hotel room. The accommodation was ridiculously expensive and I paid a whopping bill of $2000, which really exceeded my budget. I expect you to take strict measures against the people who provided me such misinformation and caused so much inconvenience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Melvil JA
Dear Sir,

My name is
Melvil
James and I would like to draw your attention to the false information
given
to me from your office regarding the nearby tourist spots. I visited London last month and as per my friend’s suggestion, I visited your office. I
enquired
about the
must
-
see
places and suggestion for
cheap
accommodation and a flexible cab service.

Firstly
, I was
told
that the London museum is open on weekends from 9 am to 6 pm.
However
, after going there, I realized that the museum closes at 3 pm on weekends.
Secondly
, the city library suggested by your guide is
currently
closed to the public
because
of renovation activities. The phone number of the cab driver provided to me was
also
incorrect.
In addition
to that, the hotel recommended by you was too costly.

I faced numerous problems
because
of the misleading data. The museum
was closed
by the time I reached there and I
got
so
much disheartened.
Next
day morning, I went to the library and realized that it
was closed
for repairs. I ended up spending most of my time staying idle in the hotel room. The accommodation was
ridiculously
expensive and I paid a whopping bill of $2000, which
really
exceeded my budget.

I
expect
you to take strict measures against the
people
who provided me such misinformation and caused
so
much inconvenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


Melvil
JA
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IELTS letter You recently visited a foreign country and got some information at the Tourist Information Centre. The information given to you was wrong. Write a letter to the centre manager and explain What was the information required? How was the wrong information provided? What problems did you have because of this

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  American English
8 paragraphs
240 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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