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You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it?

You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it? e5WLW
Dear Sir, I am Amandeep Kaur, yesterday I hired a taxi from company from Jalandhar. I am writing this letter to inform you that I forgot some my essential papers in your taxi. I hired taxi to attend my research work at Amritsar. After finished my work I came back home and I open my bag for papers unfortunately all my paper work was missing. Then I realised that I forgot all the important documents on the backside of your car. These papers are very significant in my life because I spend my five years to complete this research work for my phd thesis. It is really my hard struggle to reached at the end level. I would like to request please send my documents at the given address. It’s my humble request to post it soon as possible because I have shortage of time to submit this to the university. I really appreciate you. If you need any information about my home town feel free to contact me. Hoping to see your prompt response regarding this matter. Yours Sincerely. A
Dear Sir,

I am Amandeep
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Kaur
, yesterday I hired a taxi from
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company
from Jalandhar. I am writing this letter to inform you that I forgot
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my essential" or "some essential"?
some my essential
papers in your taxi.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hired taxi to attend my research
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work
at Amritsar.

After finished my
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work
I came back home and I open my bag for papers unfortunately all my paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
was missing. Then I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that I forgot all the
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important
documents on the backside of your car. These papers are
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very
significant in my life
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because
I spend my five years to complete this research
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
for my
The more common abbreviation of the term 'philosophiae doctor' is "PhD".
phd
thesis. It is
really
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
struggle to reached at the
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end
level.

I would like to request
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
my documents at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
address. It’s my humble request to post it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I have shortage of time to submit this to the university. I
really
appreciate you.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you need any information about my home town feel free to contact me.

Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
your prompt response regarding this matter.

Yours
Sincerely
. A

IELTS letter You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it?

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  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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