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Email to Roshan for MBA purpose

Email to Roshan for MBA purpose 0A08G

Hello Roshan Lakhotiya Thank you for call and email to me yesterday. first I am so sorry that could not give a quick response and not attend your call its really bad luck for me yesterday I was busy so sorry for yesterday. usually, I am free at 1 pm according to GMT. you can call me if I am lucky I attend your call. so I have some Queries about MBA. So let me introduce Myself. My name is Hamza I know you know but I pretty sure You don't know I am from Pakistan and I lived in Lahore City. I have completed my graduation in Mechanical Engineering in 2020 with 3. 454 CGPA and I am Ashrae Member for the last 3 years here is my Ashrea ID 8352240. Here my some queries are 1) am I qualify for a scholarship with a 3. 454 CGPA? 2)What is the criteria university offers scholarship For International Student? (I saw the website but I am not satisfied that's the reason I asking a question again) 3) Is any quota for Pakistan country as an international student? 4) How much takes time to complete the process after I apply to the MBA program? 5) Could I take direct admission in MBA? 6) I am done with 4 years of Mechanical Engineering and I dont want to do a foundation course ( Is it necessary for me first i do a foundation course then I will enter in MBA? ) 7) if I attain 7. 0 bands in each section So what chances for me to get an admission direct in MBA in UCW. Kindly reply to me when you are free. I very thank full to you that you take some time for me your busy life

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