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Complain to restaurant manager about meal or service

Complain to restaurant manager about meal or service 56glQ
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to complain about food and your cuisine customer's service. I come to your place every month but this month me and my team members did not like your customer service. I wanted that you need to know about your some staff members, on that that employee name Arjun was serving the food and drinks. We ordered Indian cuisine like chapati, chilli paneer and raita. Firstly he forget to serve the water and then he serve the food which is cold and when I ask from him, he looks like little upset and angry. You really need to make sure everyday what's going with your staff members. If your restaurant hiring new members so make sure they get a good and proper training before they start serving to customers. I am waiting for your reply Yours faithfully Loveleen Preet Kaur
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to complain about food and your cuisine customer's service. I
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come
to your place every month
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but
this month me and my team
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members
did not like your customer service.

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I
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wanted that you
need to know about your
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some
staff
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members
, on that that employee name Arjun was serving the food and drinks. We ordered Indian cuisine like chapati,
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chilli
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paneer
and
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raita
.
Firstly
he
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forget
to serve the
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water and
then he
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serve
the food which is
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cold
and when I ask from him, he looks like
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little
upset and angry.

You
really
need to
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make
sure
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everyday
what's going with your staff
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members
. If your restaurant hiring new
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members
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so
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make
sure they
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get
a
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good
and proper training
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before
they
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start
serving to customers. I am waiting for your
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reply


Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter Complain to restaurant manager about meal or service

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
147 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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