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You recently took part in a training course. The organizer of the course has asked you for some feedback. Give details of the course you took part in. Say what you found useful on the course. Suggest ways the course could be improved.

You recently took part in a training course. The organizer of the course has asked you for some feedback. Give details of the course you took part in. Say what you found useful on the course. Suggest ways the course could be improved. R553V
Dear Mr. Amiri, I am writing to you to give you some feedback on the Aviation Training Course which I have been attending to during last three months. Please allow me to elaborate. I have attended the Aviation Training Course held by your organization during summer in Mehrabad airport to help new graduates be familiar with the apron and the rules of the airport. I found this course to be extremely helpful as this was the first time I was able to see everything I have been taught theoretically, in action, and alive. However, it is strongly suggested that by extending the course period, you give your trainees more time to understand the key elements. This could help them play a better role in the aviation industry in the future when they have started being employed.
Dear Mr.
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Amiri
, I am writing to you to give you
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some
feedback on the Aviation Training
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Course
which I have been attending to during last three months.
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Please
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allow
me to elaborate.

I have attended the Aviation Training
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Course
held by your organization during summer in
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Mehrabad
airport to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
new graduates be familiar with the apron and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
of the airport. I found this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to be
extremely
helpful as this was the
first
time I was able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
everything I have
been taught
theoretically
, in action, and alive.
However
, it is
strongly
suggested that by extending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
period, you give your trainees more time to understand the key elements. This could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them play a better role in the aviation industry in the future when they have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
being employed
.

IELTS letter You recently took part in a training course. The organizer of the course has asked you for some feedback. Give details of the course you took part in. Say what you found useful on the course. Suggest ways the course could be improved.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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