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you had spent a week your friends house for a hoilday trip and left your wallet there

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Hi Gopi, Hope you are doing well. i am writing this letter to let you know that i had left my wallet in your home. It was a nice holiday and thank you for joining us on this holiday trip and sharing the photos that were taken together. The trip was a memorable one and we got to visit the parks, lakes, beautiful scenic trails and the camping ground view adjacent to the lakes in Banff. I had left my wallet in your home in the chaning room. I remember i had placed the wallet on the dressing table located in the northern side of the room. Its a black purse with my name printed on the top of the purse. I am in need of the wallet as it has my credit cards and some official contacts in it. would you be kind enough to send the wallet over courier like UPS, Purolator who has an option for delivery within two days. I would be grateful if you can send the wallet tomorrow. yours lovingly, R. Sivarajan
Hi
Gopi
,

Hope you are doing well.
i
am writing this letter to
let
you know that
i
had
left
my
wallet
in your home.

It was a nice holiday and thank you for joining us on this holiday trip and sharing the photos that
were taken
together. The trip was a memorable
one and
we
got
to visit the parks, lakes,
beautiful
scenic trails and the camping ground view adjacent to the lakes in
Banff
.

I had
left
my
wallet
in your home in the
chaning
room. I remember
i
had placed the
wallet
on the dressing table located in the northern side of the room.
Its
a black purse with my name printed on the top of the purse.

I am in need of the
wallet
as it has my credit cards and
some
official contacts in it. would you be kind
enough
to
send
the
wallet
over courier like UPS,
Purolator
who has an option for delivery within two days.

I would be grateful if you can
send
the
wallet
tomorrow.

yours
lovingly
,

R.
Sivarajan
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IELTS letter you had spent a week your friends house for a hoilday trip and left your wallet there

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  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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