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write a letter of complaint on the reception area

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to outline the complaints that have been made about the reception area as well as to suggest several improvements to be implemented. As number of visitors expressed their dissatisfaction with our company’s reception area due to the fact that it is not spacious and overcrowded. What is more, there are not enough desks to fill in the various forms. In addition, only one receptionist can be addressed to with a great number of questions which leads to the place being overcrowded. Needless to say, the area where visitors arrive is extremely important as it is the image of a company and gives the first impression about the organization. Taking everything into consideration, it is highly recommended to widen the reception area by using the next room to it. Moreover, it would be beneficial to equipped the place with additional furniture for visitors to use. Finally, hiring a second receptionist would be definitely advantageous. I am looking forward to the changes being implemented. Yours sincerely, Ben Adams

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to outline the complaints that have been made
 about the reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
as well
 as to suggest several improvements to be implemented
.

As number of visitors expressed their dissatisfaction with our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 due to the fact that it is not spacious and overcrowded. What is more
, there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 desks to fill in the various forms. In addition
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one receptionist can be addressed
 to with a great number of questions which leads to the place being overcrowded
.

Needless to say, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 where visitors arrive is extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 as it is the image of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and gives the first
 impression about the organization.

Taking everything into consideration, it is highly
The verb 'recommended' is used with the gerund form: "recommended widening".recommended widening
recommended to widen
 the reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 by using the next
 room to it.

Moreover
, it would be beneficial Did you mean "to equip"?to equip
to equipped
 the place with additional furniture for visitors to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. Finally
, hiring a second receptionist would be definitely advantageous.

I am looking forward to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
being implemented
.

Yours sincerely
,

Ben Adams