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You are a costumer.One afternoon on when you was at shop.You forgot purse.One gentelmen sent your purse your home.Write a letter to the shop where the gentelmen works to extent your gratefulness

You are a costumer. One afternoon on when you was at shop. You forgot purse. One gentelmen sent your purse your home. Write a letter to the shop where the gentelmen works to extent your gratefulness kbgOe
Dear Sir or Madam. This letter is to express my thanks and appreciation for Mrs. Lucy, the assistant of your shop sent my purse my home. I am a costumer and every weekend I buy foods from your shop. Last Sunday afternoon when I exited door of shop my purse accidentally felt out of my bag and I did not notice it. When I come home. I knew it and I was worried. I could not find it anywhere. After an hour, door was knocked. When I opened it my purse was left under the door, I looked down stairs from the flat stairs, your assistant was coming down yhe stairs. I was very much grateful to Mrs. Lucy for her kindness. Please forward my heartful thankfulness to her. I feel very much proud of your shop for having such a good assistant. If Mrs. Lucy was late for work that day. I would like to compensate you. I do hope that your shop would reward Mrs. Lucy for her noble deeds. Yours faithfully, Sevinch Turdimurodova
Dear Sir or Madam. This letter is to express my thanks and appreciation for
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. Lucy, the assistant of your
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my purse my home. I am a costumer and every weekend I
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buy
foods from your
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shop
. Last Sunday afternoon when I exited door of
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shop
my purse
accidentally
felt out of my bag and I did not notice it. When I
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come
home. I knew it and I
was worried
. I could not find it anywhere. After an hour, door
was knocked
. When I opened it my purse was
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left
under the door, I looked down stairs from the flat stairs, your assistant was coming down
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stairs. I was
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much grateful to
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Mrs
. Lucy for her kindness.
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forward my
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heartful
thankfulness to her. I feel
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very
much proud of your
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shop
for having such a
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good
assistant. If
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Mrs
. Lucy was late for work that day. I would like to compensate you. I do hope that your
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shop
would reward
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Mrs
. Lucy for her noble deeds. Yours
faithfully
,
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Sevinch
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Turdimurodova
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IELTS letter You are a costumer. One afternoon on when you was at shop. You forgot purse. One gentelmen sent your purse your home. Write a letter to the shop where the gentelmen works to extent your gratefulness

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  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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