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You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you:

You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you: PRkOK

Dear Salah, I’m sorry about not replying to your letter. Did you see a football match yesterday? I watched El-Classico. I think you were so happy yesterday. Because I know you are a fan of Real Madrid. By the way, I want to tell you about fundraising activities for charity. During our trip to the orphanage by our school to make orphans happy with different gifts, I was convinced that we should keep them blissful. That’s why I thought a lot about how to help orphans both financially and spiritually. They are living without the love of their parents. So they need to feel like they are growing up in parental care. In my opinion, It would be useful if we created generous boxes in every place which is frequently populated by many people. For example, we can build them near to the refueling centers, markets, and other places. By the way, charity is still going on so I think you also want to take part in it. After all, you like to contribute to such things. If you shared these messages with your friends, you would be making a huge influence on changing some people’s lives for the better. I hope to hear good news from you soon. Don’t forget to reply! Your best friend, Dior.

Dear Salah,

I’m sorry about not replying to your letter. Did you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 a football match yesterday? I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
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El-Classico
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy yesterday. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I know you are a fan of Real Madrid. By the way, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about fundraising activities for charity.

During our trip to the orphanage by our school to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 orphans happy with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 gifts, I was convinced
 that we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them blissful. That’s why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 a lot about how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 orphans both financially
 and spiritually
. They are living without the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 of their parents. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 they need to feel like they are growing up in parental care.

In my opinion, It would be useful if we created generous boxes in every place which is frequently
 populated by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. For example
, we can build them near to the refueling centers, markets, and other places.

By the way, charity is still
 going on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you also
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in it. After all
, you like to contribute to such things.

If you shared these messages with your friends, you would be making a huge influence on changing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 for the better. I hope to hear This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Don’t forget to reply!

Your best friend,

Dior. 