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You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you:

You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you: PRkOK
Dear Salah, I’m sorry about not replying to your letter. Did you see a football match yesterday? I watched El-Classico. I think you were so happy yesterday. Because I know you are a fan of Real Madrid. By the way, I want to tell you about fundraising activities for charity. During our trip to the orphanage by our school to make orphans happy with different gifts, I was convinced that we should keep them blissful. That’s why I thought a lot about how to help orphans both financially and spiritually. They are living without the love of their parents. So they need to feel like they are growing up in parental care. In my opinion, It would be useful if we created generous boxes in every place which is frequently populated by many people. For example, we can build them near to the refueling centers, markets, and other places. By the way, charity is still going on so I think you also want to take part in it. After all, you like to contribute to such things. If you shared these messages with your friends, you would be making a huge influence on changing some people’s lives for the better. I hope to hear good news from you soon. Don’t forget to reply! Your best friend, Dior.
Dear Salah,

I’m sorry about not replying to your letter. Did you
see
a football match yesterday? I
watched
El-Classico
. I
think
you were
so
happy yesterday.
Because
I know you are a fan of Real Madrid. By the way, I want to
tell
you about fundraising activities for charity.

During our trip to the orphanage by our school to
make
orphans happy with
different
gifts, I
was convinced
that we should
keep
them blissful. That’s why I
thought
a lot about how to
help
orphans both
financially
and
spiritually
. They are living without the
love
of their parents.
So
they need to feel like they are growing up in parental care.

In my opinion, It would be useful if we created generous boxes in every place which is
frequently
populated by
many
people
.
For example
, we can build them near to the refueling centers, markets, and other places.

By the way, charity is
still
going on
so
I
think
you
also
want to
take part
in it.
After all
, you like to contribute to such things.

If you shared these messages with your friends, you would be making a huge influence on changing
some
people
’s
lives
for the better. I hope to hear
good
news from you
soon
. Don’t forget to reply!

Your best friend,

Dior.
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IELTS letter You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you:

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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