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Write a personal letter describing a new family business

Write a personal letter describing a new family business 73pgY

Dear Mom How have you been? I hope you are well. I would like to give you some good news about our dreamy business. I found an excellent place for our book café. It is in a good region and just suitable for our purpose. Finally, we can start our family business and will expand it. It would be great you come and visit the place. I’m interested in contract and buy this beautiful place and start our business. I hope to see here before end of next week. Warm wishes, Your daughter, Azadeh

Dear Mom

How have you been? I hope you are well.

I would like to give you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news about our dreamy business. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 found an excellent place for our book café. It is in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 region and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 suitable for our purpose.

Finally
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our family business and will expand it.

It would be great you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and visit the place. I’m interested in contract and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 place and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 our business.

I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of next
 week.

Warm wishes,

Your daughter, Possible spelling mistake found.AzazelAzaleaAQADERAzavea
Azadeh