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what skills do you find important to becoming independent?

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Hello, Today I will tell you about independence in our lives. And to be an independent person is not difficult if you really try. Independence is a necessity for you to start a new life, one in which you are always aware that you do not need to depend on anyone. In my opinion, one of the most important skills to become independent is time management. Every second that passes will never be regained, so we need to have a specific plan to manage time in the most scientific way. Time management can help you reduce work pressure. The deadlines that "stick" you constantly make you bored and tired. This will reduce work productivity. So good time management will help you allocate work properly and reduce work pressure. When you let things go out of your control, you become proactive. So you will have more positive energy, avoid stressful situations because of work. And it will help us complete our goals faster and confidently shine.
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