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we are at your service with another course of Dreamers group pieces of training called Forex market training.

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Hello, we are at your service with another course of Dreamers group pieces of training called Forex market training. We hope that by learning this course we can make very good profits from this market. We will start this course with a famous quote from Abraham Lincoln, who was once the President of the United States. If I have 6 hours to cut a tree, I will spend 4 hours sharpening it. They work very slowly with an ax and fall into life with a lot of effort, unaware that they must spend time training and learning and sharpening their axes. So in the first step, I congratulate you that you decided to participate in this Forex training course and sharpen your ax. We start today's discussion by introducing the types of markets and traditional markets and capital markets. As you know, traditionally in different countries, we have had different markets since ancient times, for example, we had a commodity market for many years. It is the market in which the producer produces his own product and after passing through intermediaries, it finally reaches the consumer. The metal market, where markets come together every morning to set a price for metals, determines the price across the country. The energy market is the market in which oil is traded. Precious metals market or precious metal A market like the gold market, which is especially familiar to Iranian women and has long been used as a reliable investment is a stock market in which the shares of various companies are bought and sold.
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training
called Forex
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cut
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and learning and sharpening their axes.
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in the
first
step, I congratulate you that you decided to participate in this Forex
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training
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course
and sharpen your ax. We
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start
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today
's discussion by introducing the types of markets and traditional markets and capital markets. As you know,
traditionally
in
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different
countries, we have had
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markets since ancient times,
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for
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years. It is the
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market
in which the producer produces his
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own
product and after passing through intermediaries, it
finally
reaches the consumer. The
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metal
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market
, where markets
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come
together every morning to set a price for
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metals
, determines the price across the country. The energy
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market
is the
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market
in which oil
is traded
. Precious
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metals
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market
or precious
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metal
A
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like the gold
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market
, which is
especially
familiar to Iranian women and has long been
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used
as a reliable investment is a stock
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market
in which the shares of various
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companies
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bought
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