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Describe the place where you lived in during your childhood

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Hi everyone, today I want to tell you about the place I lived in during my childhood. I was born in a small house in the suburb of Ha Tinh province. It was a nice, quiet, and peaceful area. There weren’t many buildings and public transportation here so the air was fresher and I really liked riding my bike with my friend on the long roads near fields. My house was adorable with pink wall, which is my favourite color. And we had many flowers in front of my house. Beside my house we had many fruit trees like orange, mango, banana, apple, pineapple…. So we could eat fruit all year and didn’t need to buy it. Moreove, I had many childhood friends, we used to run around the fiels, swim in the rivers in summer.
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buildings and public transportation here
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liked riding my bike with my friend on the long roads near fields.

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color. And we had
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we had
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fruit trees like orange, mango, banana, apple, pineapple….
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IELTS letter Describe the place where you lived in during your childhood

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3 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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