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You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you: Describe the aims of the charity Explain how you raised the funds for the charity Encourage them to take part in a fundraising activity.

You recently took part in a fundraising activity in your community to raise money for charity. Write an email to a friend in which you: Describe the aims of the charity Explain how you raised the funds for the charity Encourage them to take part in a fundraising activity. PRE92

Dear Squash, So sorry, I could not write to you earlier. I was rather busy for a long time. I am pleased to receive your e-mail which is about your health. I organized a bene*cial charity. I am building a big technology center situated in the city center and near the government palace. You know, our world is changing that anything which is in it, is developing thoroughly. Technology is one part of this development. The location which will be located shortly will implement a lot of duties. We have three aims for building a technology center. First, upgrading the level of knowledge which is possessed by the city population. Second, dissemination of modernity among the urban. The third and the most relevant is exploring discoveries. We must invent discovery and use it for improvement. Our center will start in February this year. It was hard to gain enough *nance. At *rst, no one was interested in our charity. Nevertheless, we promoted our idea. Soon, many people came and contributed their best, our money maximized rapidly. In the end, my charitable group has enough funds. We have begun our building layout. it is carried out at the moment. I offer to you that you should also give some money to charity. It is paltry for you, in addition, you may acquire a supernatural reward. Furthermore, learning in our technology center will be altogether free! I expect that you won't stare at any girls. Take care of yourself. Like Hawk

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