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Write a letter to introduce a tourist destination in your hometown to a friend who is about to visit your hometown

Write a letter to introduce a tourist destination in your hometown to a friend who is about to visit your hometown 0Ewyq
Dear Linh Many thanks for your email. It's great to know that you are coming to Hai Duong. I will take you to visit some famous and interesting places here. First we will go to Con Son - Kiet Bac in Chi Linh district. It's a very famous historical site. You can learn about culture or worship Vietnam national heroes here. If you don't like to learn about history, then you should go to Chu Dong pottery village. You can create your own ceramic product made by artisans. It's fun isn't it? Besides, if you love beauty, you can go to the sunflower garden in Hai Duong city. Here you can take pictures, see flowers and enjoy a beautiful space. I think you will have a great time in my hometown. Look forward to seeing you soon. Best Nhi
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Linh
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thanks for your email. It's great to know that you are coming to
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Hai
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Duong
. I will take you to visit
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some
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famous
and interesting places here.
First
we will go to Con Son
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Kiet
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Bac
in Chi
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Linh
district. It's a
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very
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famous
historical site. You can learn about culture or worship Vietnam national heroes here. If you don't like to learn about history, then you should go to
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Chu
Dong pottery village. You can create your
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own
ceramic product made by artisans. It's
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fun
isn't it?
Besides
, if you
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love
beauty, you can go to the sunflower garden in
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Hai
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Duong
city. Here you can take pictures,
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see
flowers and enjoy a
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beautiful
space. I
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think
you will have a great time in my hometown. Look forward to seeing you
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soon
. Best
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Nhi

IELTS letter Write a letter to introduce a tourist destination in your hometown to a friend who is about to visit your hometown

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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