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introduce my hometown to a friend who wants to visit my hometown

introduce my hometown to a friend who wants to visit my hometown yx7OV
Dear Linh Many thanks for your email. It's great to know that you are coming to Hai Duong. I will take you to visit some famous and interesting places here. First we will go to Con Son - Kiet Bac in Chi Linh district. It's a very famous historical site. You can learn about culture or worship Vietnam national heroes here. If you don't like to learn about history, then you should go to Chu Dong pottery village. You can create your own ceramic product made by artisans. It's fun isn't it? Besides, if you love beauty, you can go to the sunflower garden in Hai Duong city. Here you can take pictures, see flowers and enjoy a beautiful space. I think you will have a great time in my hometown. Look forward to seeing you soonBest Nhi
Dear
Linh
Many
thanks for your email. It's great to know that you are coming to
Hai
Duong
. I will take you to visit
some
famous
and interesting places here.
First
we will go to Con Son
-
Kiet
Bac
in Chi
Linh
district. It's a
very
famous
historical site. You can learn about culture or worship Vietnam national heroes here. If you don't like to learn about history, then you should go to
Chu
Dong pottery village. You can create your
own
ceramic product made by artisans. It's
fun
isn't it?
Besides
, if you
love
beauty, you can go to the sunflower garden in
Hai
Duong
city. Here you can take pictures,
see
flowers and enjoy a
beautiful
space. I
think
you will have a great time in my hometown. Look forward to seeing you
soonBest
Nhi
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IELTS letter introduce my hometown to a friend who wants to visit my hometown

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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