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You are currently trying to improve your knowledg of a language which is not your first language you have a friend who speaks this language fluent you have. Decided to write to this friend.

You are currently trying to improve your knowledg of a language which is not your first language you have a friend who speaks this language fluent you have. Decided to write to this friend. rGaYN
Dear priya, I hope you and your family will be fine. I am writing to this letter because I have need you your help in improving my language. I had listen your talk with someone in English. when my sister was marriage. your English language is very good. I got for a admission in course. this course all subjects in English. I have many problems in this language. I humbly request, you please suggest me how can i improve my english language quickly. your command over the language is really good. I want you to suggest me some easy ways to learn English language. I feel to learn it in formal way is boring and time consuming. I am coming to next month to meet my sister. which is live in your city. together we will come to your college and I think that time we can speak about it more open. Your faithfuly
Dear
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priya
, I hope you and your family will be fine. I am writing to this letter
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because
I have need you your
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help
in improving my
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language
. I had
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listen
your talk with someone in English.
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when
my sister was marriage.
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your
English
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language
is
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very
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good
. I
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got
for
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a
admission in course.
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this
course all subjects in English. I have
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many
problems in this
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language
. I
humbly
request, you
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please
suggest me how can
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i
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improve
my
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english
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language
quickly
.
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your
command over the
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language
is
really
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good
. I want you to suggest me
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some
easy ways to learn English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. I feel to learn it in formal way is boring and
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time consuming
.
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I
am coming to
next
month to
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meet
my sister.
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which
is
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live
in your city.
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together
we will
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come
to your college and I
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think
that time we can speak about it more open. Your
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faithfuly
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IELTS letter You are currently trying to improve your knowledg of a language which is not your first language you have a friend who speaks this language fluent you have. Decided to write to this friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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