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You are currently trying to improve your knowledg of a language which is not your first language you have a friend who speaks this language fluent you have. Decided to write to this friend.

You are currently trying to improve your knowledg of a language which is not your first language you have a friend who speaks this language fluent you have. Decided to write to this friend. rGaYN
Dear priya, I hope you and your family will be fine. I am writing to this letter because I have need you your help in improving my language. I had listen your talk with someone in English. when my sister was marriage. your English language is very good. I got for a admission in course. this course all subjects in English. I have many problems in this language. I humbly request, you please suggest me how can i improve my english language quickly. your command over the language is really good. I want you to suggest me some easy ways to learn English language. I feel to learn it in formal way is boring and time consuming. I am coming to next month to meet my sister. which is live in your city. together we will come to your college and I think that time we can speak about it more open. Your faithfuly
Dear
priya
, I hope you and your family will be fine. I am writing to this letter
because
I have need you your
help
in improving my
language
. I had
listen
your talk with someone in English.
when
my sister was marriage.
your
English
language
is
very
good
. I
got
for
a
admission in course.
this
course all subjects in English. I have
many
problems in this
language
. I
humbly
request, you
please
suggest me how can
i
improve
my
english
language
quickly
.
your
command over the
language
is
really
good
. I want you to suggest me
some
easy ways to learn English
language
. I feel to learn it in formal way is boring and
time consuming
.
I
am coming to
next
month to
meet
my sister.
which
is
live
in your city.
together
we will
come
to your college and I
think
that time we can speak about it more open. Your
faithfuly
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IELTS letter You are currently trying to improve your knowledg of a language which is not your first language you have a friend who speaks this language fluent you have. Decided to write to this friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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