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Write a letter to your friend to tell about your favorite teacher

Write a letter to your friend to tell about your favorite teacher NWnL2
Dear Henry, Many thanks for your letter. I am sorry if it has taken me so long to write to you, but I have been really busy with my tight schedule at school. I am writing to respond to your inquiry regarding my favorite teacher. If my memory serves me right, I have already told you about Ms. Thuy, my English instructor. She is the most incredible educator that I have ever witnessed. When we raise questions in her sessions, she is really enthusiastic about teaching and clearing all of our doubts.  She teaches us so well that English, which was formerly a challenging subject, has become much easier. She is also the one who sets the mood for the entire class with her hilarious stories and engaging lessons that she teaches. Ms. Thuy is not only a fantastic teacher but also one of my closest friends. She is the one who I confide in concerning personal matters time and time again. Even when I am in a terrible mood and want to hear her advice, she is not only by my side, but also tells me jokes to cheer me up and counsels me on my doubts. That is why I enjoy talking to her very often. What about you? Do you have your favourite teacher? Drop me a line and tell me about her. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Mai. ---Hết---
Dear Henry,

Many
thanks for your letter. I am sorry if it has taken me
so
long to write to you,
but
I have

been
really
busy with my tight schedule at school. I am writing to respond to your inquiry

regarding my favorite teacher.

If my memory serves me right, I have already
told
you about Ms.
Thuy
, my English

instructor. She is the most incredible educator that I have ever witnessed.

When we raise questions in her sessions, she is
really
enthusiastic about teaching and

clearing all of our doubts.  She teaches us
so
well that English, which was
formerly
a

challenging subject, has become much easier. She is
also
the one who sets the mood for the

entire
class
with her hilarious stories and engaging lessons that she teaches.

Ms.
Thuy
is not
only
a fantastic teacher
but
also
one of my closest friends. She is the one

who I confide in concerning personal matters time and time again. Even when I am in a

terrible mood and want to hear her advice, she is not
only
by my side,
but
also
tells
me jokes

to cheer me up and counsels me on my doubts.
That is
why I enjoy talking to her
very
often
.

What about you? Do you have your
favourite
teacher? Drop me a line and
tell
me about her.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Mai.

---Hết--
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to tell about your favorite teacher

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
238 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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