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You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar

You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar lx1VQ
Dear Mr. Jackson, I am writing you this letter from the department of marketing in regards of the seminar that our company is organizing next month, The seminar will be covering many topics which will play a big role in increasing the company’s productivity. It would be an honor to have you in one of my presentations in this seminar and I would like to get your vision and guidance through this presentation, and i am sure that i can benefit and learn from your experience in this department. Furthermore, the seminar venue will be on February 2nd at the 4 seasons Hotel, it would be my pleasure if you would attend this seminar. I look forward to obtain your reply. Your sincerely, Ebrahim Ahmed
Dear Mr. Jackson,

I am writing you this letter from the department of marketing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards of
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
that our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is organizing
next
month, The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
will be covering
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many
topics which will play a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
role in increasing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s productivity.

It would be an honor to have you in one of my presentations in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
and I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your vision and guidance through this presentation, and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am sure that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can benefit and learn from your experience in this department.

Furthermore
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
venue will be on February 2nd at the 4 seasons Hotel, it would be my pleasure if you would attend this seminar.

I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to obtaining".
to obtain
your reply.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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Ebrahim
Ahmed
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IELTS letter You are organizing a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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