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You face an advertisement. And you want to be a primary school teacher

You face an advertisement. And you want to be a primary school teacher JYQb0
Dear Mrs HunterWith reference to your advertisement in Thursday's edition of the Darakchi. I am interested in applying for the position of primary school teacher. I am 37 years old and currently teaching in 33. I have a C1 degree awarded by STC in 2021. I completed my diploma in Karshi State University in 2008. I have been working for 33 since 2008. During this time, I have been enjoying teaching a variety of subjects, including English literature and English. I consider myself punctual, hard-eorking and fair. I enjoy working with children and have good organizational skills. I enclose a reference from my present employer. L would be greatiful if you would consider my application. I am available for interview any weekend mornings. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Sabrina
Dear Mrs
HunterWith
reference to your advertisement in Thursday's edition of the
Darakchi
. I
am interested
in applying for the position of primary school teacher. I am 37 years
old
and
currently
teaching in 33.
I
have a C1 degree awarded by STC in 2021.
I
completed my diploma in
Karshi
State University in 2008.
I
have been working for 33 since 2008. During this time, I have been enjoying teaching a variety of subjects, including English literature and English. I consider myself punctual,
hard-eorking
and
fair
. I enjoy working with children and have
good
organizational
skills
.
I
enclose a reference from my present employer. L would be
greatiful
if you would consider my application. I am available for interview any weekend mornings. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely
Sabrina
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IELTS letter You face an advertisement. And you want to be a primary school teacher

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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