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an unemployed driver with high experience

an unemployed driver with high experience 5bMwe
Dear mr. Jons I am expressing my opinion by asking you to hire me for the job I saw in the ad. I learned for this job about 1 year and i reached a proffesional level. For add, in my spare time i have improved my driving skills. For get acquainted for you i tel about myself. I'm a simple boy who named Tom i'm in 26 years old. In my driving time i try to well treated with my passengers and i do the best to be honest. and my clients liked this. I hope you answered for my letter. your employee Tom
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Jons
I am expressing my opinion by asking you to hire me for the job I
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in the ad. I learned for this job about 1 year and
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i
reached a
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proffesional
level. For
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, in my spare time
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i
have
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improved
my driving
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skills
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get
acquainted for
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you
i tel about myself. I'm a simple boy who named Tom
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i'm
in 26 years
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old
. In my driving time
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i
try to well treated with my passengers and
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i
do the best to be honest.
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and
my clients liked this.

I hope you answered for my letter.

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your
employee Tom
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IELTS letter an unemployed driver with high experience

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
103 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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