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Apartment on Rent for six months

Apartment on Rent for six months 0pYEl
Dear Sir/ Madam, I undersigned Sameer Thorat, I have seen your multiple adveristements in papers and have checked your website of real estate. This is to inform you that, I am looking for a flat on rent for my family as we will be shifting to Mumbai for next six months. My requirements are very minimal as the stay period is only for limited period. My family consist of 4 people including my wife and two daughters. First preference will be a safe and secure place with proper security arrangements as I will busy in my office work for entire day. 2 bedroom with kids play area will be sufficient for us. Please let me know what will be the amount of rent and how I need to transfer the money, there is no budget concerns however the only condition is, it should meet all my requirements. You can contact me on my email id: sameer@gmail. com Your sincerely, Sameer Thorat
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I undersigned
Sameer
Thorat
, I have
seen
your multiple
adveristements
in papers and have
checked
your website of real estate.

This is to inform you that, I am looking for a flat on rent for my family as we will be shifting to Mumbai for
next
six months.

My requirements are
very
minimal as the stay period is
only
for limited period. My family consist of 4
people
including my wife and two daughters.

First
preference will be a safe and secure place with proper security arrangements as I will busy in my office work for entire day.

2 bedroom with kids play area will be sufficient for us.

Please
let
me know what will be the amount of rent and how I need to transfer the money, there is no budget concerns
however
the
only
condition is, it should
meet


all my requirements.

You can contact me on my email id:
sameer@gmail
.
com


Your
sincerely
,

Sameer
Thorat
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IELTS letter Apartment on Rent for six months

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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