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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___

Dear liza, How're you? Hope you're doing well. I just wanted to thank you immensely for taking care of my pet during my vacation. As you may know, pets are not allowed in airways for security reason, I have to put my pets on your home. Since I'm very much aware of the fact that your parents do not like having pets in your house, it's your kindness to keep my dog with you for a week. This favour helps me to save my money. If you do not agree to look after my dog, I have to higher another person to take care of my pet and also need to pay money which cost me a fortune. Not only this but it's also become a herculean task for me. Words are not enough to express my gratitude toward you, so what I plan to offer lunch at your favourite restaurant as a compensate. I know you have golden are but I don't want no from you. Can't wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Kinjal
Dear
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liza
, How're you? Hope you're doing well. I
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just
wanted to thank you
immensely
for taking care of my pet during my vacation.

As you may know,
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pets
are not
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allowed
in airways for security reason, I
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have to
put my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pets
on your home. Since I'm
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very
much aware of the fact that your parents do not like having
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pets
in your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, it's your kindness to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my dog with you for a week.

This
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favour
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helps
me to save my money. If you do not
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agree
to look after my dog, I
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have to
higher another person to take care of my pet and
also
need to pay money which cost me a fortune. Not
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only
this
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but
it's
also
become a
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herculean
task for me.

Words are not
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enough
to express my gratitude toward you,
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so
what I plan to offer lunch at your
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favourite’ is British English.
favourite
restaurant as a
The word ‘compensate’ is a verb. Did you mean the noun “compensation”?
compensate
. I know you have golden are
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but
I don'
Double negatives are discouraged in standard English. Can you reformulate this phrase or is a comma missing?
t want no
from you.

Can't wait to
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see
you.

Yours
lovingly
,
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Kinjal
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IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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