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Dear Yaman, I hope you're doing well.

Dear Yaman, I hope you're doing well. I just wanted to thank you very much for taking care of my pets during my vacation. I really didn't even expect you to allocate such a huge time to do so. As you may know, pets are not allowed to travel in any of Syrian aircraft due to security reasons, hence, I was seeking for companies to look after my pets during my long holiday, and all of them were far too expensive. Therefore, your great action saved me a lot of money and even effort. Thus, I was wondering if you please accept a small compensation regarding your amazing job during my absence, will be extremely appreciated as I know how much it was difficult. Once again, I extremely thankful for your great effort and I'm so sorry for any inconvenient that this issue made for you, looking to see you soon. All the best, Bilal

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just
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As you may know, pets are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
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companies
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a lot of
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Thus
, I was wondering if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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 compensation regarding your amazing job during my absence, will be extremely
 appreciated as I know how much it was difficult.

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so
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All the best,

Bilal