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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and she is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a new story in your country. Explain why people are interested in it. Say hiw the story personally relates to you.

Dear Carla, I hope you are good. I received your letter 2 days ago in which you asked to learn about the news in my country. The Basilica de San Martin de Tours simply known as Taal Basilica, is the largest church in asia. It is best tourist spot because of impressive view. Most foreigners, they stay there to take photos and videos that make them extremely happy. Near in Taal church there are a lot of store where our National costume is there, our signiture food like tapa, longganisa and suman is also there. Additionally in Christmas season, many people visit there because of the view is more wonderful because of beautiful design of lights that make superb happy. I am extremely impressed to my country due to the fact of people around the world they come and visit it. I hope once you read this news, you will visit and i will tour you here. See you soon and hope you are happy with this news. Your friend, Judith
Dear Carla,

I hope you are
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good
. I received your letter 2 days ago in which you asked to learn about the news in my country.

The Basilica de San Martin de Tours
simply
known as
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Taal
Basilica, is the largest church in
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asia
. It
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is best
tourist spot
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because
of impressive view. Most foreigners, they stay there to take photos and videos that
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make
them
extremely
happy. Near in
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Taal
church there are
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a lot of
store where our National costume is there, our
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signiture
food like
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tapa
,
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longganisa
and
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suman
is
also
there.

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Additionally
in Christmas season,
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many
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people
visit there
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because
of the view is more wonderful
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because
of
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beautiful
design of lights that
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make
superb happy. I am
extremely
impressed to my country due to the fact of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the world they
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come
and visit it. I hope once you read this news, you will visit and
Did you mean “I”?
i
will tour you here.

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See
you
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soon
and hope you are happy with this news.

Your friend,

Judith

IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and she is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a new story in your country. Explain why people are interested in it. Say hiw the story personally relates to you.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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