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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and she is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a new story in your country. Explain why people are interested in it. Say hiw the story personally relates to you.

Dear Carla, I hope you are good. I received your letter 2 days ago in which you asked to learn about the news in my country. The Basilica de San Martin de Tours simply known as Taal Basilica, is the largest church in asia. It is best tourist spot because of impressive view. Most foreigners, they stay there to take photos and videos that make them extremely happy. Near in Taal church there are a lot of store where our National costume is there, our signiture food like tapa, longganisa and suman is also there. Additionally in Christmas season, many people visit there because of the view is more wonderful because of beautiful design of lights that make superb happy. I am extremely impressed to my country due to the fact of people around the world they come and visit it. I hope once you read this news, you will visit and i will tour you here. See you soon and hope you are happy with this news. Your friend, Judith

Dear Carla,

I hope you are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. I received your letter 2 days ago in which you asked to learn about the news in my country.

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because
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make
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Additionally
 in Christmas season, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
 visit there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the view is more wonderful This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 design of lights that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 superb happy. I am extremely
 impressed to my country due to the fact of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around the world they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and visit it. I hope once you read this news, you will visit and Did you mean “I”?I
i
 will tour you here.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and hope you are happy with this news.

Your friend,

Judith