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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will not continue my tutor course at this time. I have a full time job at the restaurant as manager. That is the reason why I will not continue my tutor class to you. I am very great full that I promoted as manager. I take this opportunity to help me and my family for the financial problem that we have. I am sorry, my schedule is complicated and I cannot manage to attend your classes every night. When you have time you can visit me at my working place and I will treat you a meal. And also will continue to pay my balance for this month. When I have free time again I will contact you to reschedule my classes every night. I am sorry and I hope you understand my situation. Thank you so much. Faithfully yours, Judith

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to inform you that I will not continue my tutor course at this time.

I have a full time job at the restaurant as manager. That is
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class
 to you. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 great full that I promoted as manager. I take this opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me and my family for the financial problem that we have. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am sorry, my schedule is Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).complicated, and
complicated and
 I cannot manage to attend your classes every night.

When you have time you can visit me at my working place and I will treat you a meal. And also
 will continue to pay my balance for this month. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I have free time again I will contact you to reschedule my classes every night.

I am Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sorry, and
sorry and
 I hope you understand my situation.

Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much.

Faithfully
 yours,

Judith