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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. Explain what the favor was. Describe how this favor helped you. Offer compensation.

How are you? Hope you're doing well. I just wanted to thank you so much for taking care of my pet during my vacation. As you may know, dogs are not allowed in international flights for securing purpose, I have no option but to keep my dog with you. Since I know your parents don't like having pets at home, you still helped me. This favour helped me in various ways. Although I was able to higher another person for loom my dog, it's cost me a fortune. Not only is cost me but also I m not able to enjoy my holidays properly because of keeping my pet to an unknown person. As compensation, I have a secret to share with you. I bought your favourite watch from London. Also, I would like to give you a treat at your favourite restaurant. I know you have a golden heart but I don't want to hear no from you. Can't wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Kinjal
How are you? Hope you're doing well. I
just
wanted to thank you
so
much for taking care of my pet during my vacation.

As you may know, dogs are not
allowed
in international flights for securing purpose, I have no option
but
to
keep
my dog with you. Since I know your parents don't like having pets at home, you
still
helped
me.

This
favour
helped
me in various ways. Although I was able to higher another person for loom my dog, it's cost me a fortune. Not
only
is cost
me
but
also
I m
not able to enjoy my holidays
properly
because
of keeping my pet to an unknown person.

As compensation, I have a secret to share with you. I
bought
your
favourite
watch
from London.
Also
, I would like to give you a treat at your
favourite
restaurant. I know you have a golden heart
but
I don't want to hear
no
from you.

Can't wait to
see
you.

Yours
lovingly
,

Kinjal
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IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. Explain what the favor was. Describe how this favor helped you. Offer compensation.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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