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A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, explain what you would like to talk about say why students would be interested in your job suggest a possible date and time for the talk

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection to share mine working experience with fellow students of the college. To commence with, I like to share my professional experiences that I had learnt during my job. This is the reason why I want to share some knowledge input with students to make them aware about the real experience of the world that is quite different from what we expect. Students would be interested due to following reason. Firstly, the job offer is in the same coursework as they are studying now; they join as trainee to gain practical experience. Likewise, they have hands on experience till they complete their last semester which help them to remove the tag of fresher. Moreover, I would like to request you to provide a suitable time for open conversation with you along with fellow students to make them aware of the facts. In addition, I am thinking to arrange a formal communication session on the coming Saturday at 4pm. Hope to hear a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely, Tara Panchal

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in connection to share mine working You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 with fellow students of the college.

To commence with, I like to share my professional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experiences
 that I had Possible spelling mistake. ‘learnt’ is British English.learned
learnt
 during my job. This is the reason why I want to share This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 knowledge input with students to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them aware about the real You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 of the world that is
 quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from what we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
.

Students would be interested
 due to following reason. Firstly
, the job offer is in the same coursework as they are studying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
; they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 as trainee to gain practical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
. Likewise
, they have The adjective “hands-on” is spelled with a hyphen.hands-on
hands on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainingmaturitypracticeunderstandingwisdompatience
experience
 till they complete their last semester which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to remove the tag of fresher.

Moreover
, I would like to request you to provide a suitable time for open conversation with you along with fellow students to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them aware of the facts. In addition
, I am thinking to arrange a formal communication session on the coming Saturday at 4pm.

Hope to hear a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Yours sincerely
,

Tara Possible spelling mistake found.PaschalAnchal
Panchal