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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to write any addresses. 19Qn
Dear John, I hope you are doing great. Yesterday night I reached my apartment after the long holidays and I can't control my excitement to write to you. Since I planned my vacation immediately, I could not plan everything properly. I'm extremely pleased that you are staying next to my door because you always supported me at the difficult situations. I forgot to mention about watering my plant as well as giving food to parrot that I'm realising after reaching the flat. But you could manage both pretty well and I could see that while reaching here because there were lots of flowers bloom in the plants and so many veggies were also there. I never maintained my garden this well and my eyes were running out of tears due to the happiness after seeing them. I'm overjoyed about the support and recompense your effort, I will take you to your favorite Chinese restaurant at Pune to have your special dish. Waiting eagerly for you! Lovingly, Tom.
Dear John, I hope you are doing great.
This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.
Yesterday night
I reached my apartment after the long holidays and I can't control my excitement to write to you. Since I planned my vacation immediately, I could not plan everything
properly
. I'm
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
that you are staying
next
to my door
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
you always supported me at the difficult situations. I forgot to
Did you mean simply "mention watering"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mention about watering
my plant
as well
as giving food to parrot that I'
The verb 'realising' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
m realising
after reaching the flat.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
you could manage both pretty well and I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that while reaching here
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there were lots of flowers bloom in the plants and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
veggies were
also
there. I never maintained my garden this well and my eyes were running out of tears due to the happiness after seeing them. I'm overjoyed about the support and recompense your effort, I will take you to your favorite Chinese restaurant at Pune to have your special dish. Waiting
eagerly
for you!
Lovingly
, Tom.
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IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter: Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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