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A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice

A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice 19BN

Dear Anjali, I hope you and your family are all well! It was so wonderful to spend time with you last month. It felt great to catch up with you and have fun together. You have always been dear friends of mine, and always will be. Anyways, I was glad that finally, you joined your dream school and also I was sorry to hear that you are having difficulties fitting in the new School. So, I am writing this letter to provide you with a few suggestions that could help you in that situation. Firstly, As you are new to the school. It will take time to adjust to the environment. Try to interact with your fellow mates. I am sure with time they all would like your company and become your good friends. Secondly, you are always fond of extracurricular activities. I would suggest you participate in the school activities and also join the clubs. It will help you to socialize with more people and get them to know you better. Finally, if all the above don't work, then find some like-minded people and ask them to join in a fun activity and don't lose hope. Everything will be fine soon. I hope my advice has been used for you. Best Reagrds, Saloni Malhotra

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